This is a rare episode done with the mighty Marvel Method. Unintentionally so. Marc added a few beats to what was originally written (as he is always welcome and encouraged to do), so when I saw the art it just inspired something else and I tossed out the originally written dialogue (which was admittedly pretty bare) and made up something new on the fly. It’s much better now.
Just for kicks, here’s the original script. It seems so boring to me now:
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1: OG Thrice’s staff sparks and Alt. Spy Gal is forced to let go!
ALT. SPY GAL
OW!
OG THRICE
Stings, doesn’t it?
2: Alt. Spy Gal is just pummeling OG Thrice in the head while riding his back. He’s laughing it off and angles his staff back towards her!
OG THRICE
Hahahaha!
3: General Will tackles Alt. Spy Gal off of OG Thrice’s back just before the blast from his staff would connect.
SFX
ZFFWOOSH!
See you on Thursday with 879 – Losing You!
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